Children should always follow their parents' advice. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Nowadays, it is often suggested that

kids

should always listen to what their

parents

say and follow their wishes. Personally speaking, I think it is reasonable for

kids

to obey their

parents

' suggestions.

However

,

children

should not adopt all

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from

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parents

all time without any exception. My viewpoint and reasons will be

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Firstly

,

kids

should take their

parents

' suggestions since they are still at a tender age and lack critical thinking.

Children

, who are still at

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young age and have insufficient life experience, lack skill sets to determine the right thing to do and

thus

foresee the potential problems in the future. They often make decisions on impulse and have the

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, that they can do whatever they like.

Parents

,

however

, are more mature and have faced way more different situations in life than their

kids

, can help to assist their offsprings to behave correctly by giving them suggestions.

This

can lead the

children

to the right track and grow up in a positive way. Yet, there will be

also

some detrimental effects on

kids

' creativity if they adopt all the

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from

parents

. Being able to make one person's own decision is the key to

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creative thinking.

Children

are no exception in

this

case. Imagine that if the

parents

always interfere in their

kids's

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artworks and force them to listen to the opinions that the latter disagree with, the

children

's rooms for creativity will be limited. The ideas of art pieces are no longer theirs

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but belong to the

parents

.

This

will sabotage the chances for the

kids

to develop their own styles in a creative way and

thus

produce their own works. In conclusion, I believe that

kids

can benefit from taking

parents

'

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in order to avoid making huge mistakes in life.

However

, they may face the risks of losing creativity if they follow all the ideas from

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parents

.