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Many people like to eat unhealthy food even though they know it's bad for them. Why? What are the most effective ways to improve people's eating habits?

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In recent years
people
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's eating habits have changed tremendously. more and more individuals are consuming fast
food
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 on a daily basis. In
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 I will be discussing the main reason for
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 issue and suggest some solutions to it.
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 with, The cardinal reason why junk
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 is becoming popular is due to the fact that it is easier and more convenient to get. Nowadays due to
people
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's hectic ,schedule it is difficult for them to have time to prepare meals for themselves and their families. That's why most individuals turn to fast
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 because it is cheap and easy to get. A recent study that was conducted in the UK showed that eating fast
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 is cost and time effective.
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, we can not ignore the fact that junk meals are much tastier than healthy
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. As a ,
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 more and more populations are drowning in towers eating unhealthy
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.
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, we can not overlook the fact that eating unhealthy
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 is associated with major health issues
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 as obesity, diabetes , and cardiac problems.
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, many steps could be taken by the government and society to overcome
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 issue.
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 , governments should ban or at least limit the advertising of fast cuisine.
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, an awareness campaign should be introduced to educate
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 about the danger of consuming too much junk cuisine. and
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 but not least making healthy
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 easy to access and more affordable will encourage
people
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 to change their bad eating habits. In conclusion , eating unhealthy
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 will lead to negative outcomes that will not only affect individuals but
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 society as a whole.
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