you have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other you don't fully agree with this opinion. write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers Offered to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear sir or madam, I am writing

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letter with regards to the article you published in the national newspaper about town centres in your country looking very similar.

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I agree that with globalization and population increase most problems may be the same,

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as traffic and pollution, each city has its own peculiarities. The city where I have been living for over 25 years is a clear example of that. Here at Ribeirão

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the train station has more than 100 years and it is really conserved, so it is possible to observe a vintage atmosphere in the beautiful architecture.

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, downtown the main square was restored and painted with different colours, becoming a pleasant place to spend time with friends and family. Not only that, but

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nature here is extremely well preserved, so you could see trees wherever you go, and they help to soften the heat. All those factors are not seen in all town centres from my perspective. So

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why I would love to offer you a tour of my city with me as a guide. Thanks for your consideration. Yours sincerely, Mariana

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

I am writing in response to
the article published in your newspaper
I would like to express my disagreement with
the claim made in the article that
I agree with some points raised in the article
However, I believe that there are significant differences in my town center
One notable difference is
Another way in which my town center stands out is
Furthermore,
In addition to
I would be more than happy to offer
a guided tour of my town
to the writer of the article

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