In some countries, only a few young people go to classical music concerts or play classical music. Why is this the case? Should young people be encouraged to attend those concerts and learn more about classical music?

Currently, there is a tendency in some nations that there is a small number of youngsters who are both

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of attending classical

music

concerts

or

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this

classification of

music

.

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essay is dedicated to underlying roots and they should be emboldened to try more in

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fascinating field. Without a shadow of a doubt, the ever-growing acceleration in the

music

industry is the main reason that causes only an insignificant proportion of the young nowadays who go to

concerts

or play classical instruments. Apparently, there is a steady stream of trending melodies’ genres released day in and day out, which draw an appeal to young people for their versatility in depicting these days realities, things that classical do not. R&B songs of The Weeknd, which are on the top trending on Spotify can be cited as some promising examples.

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, it is undeniable to note that the newness in the

music

industry is the cause that lead to only a few youngsters

interested

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in classical

music

.

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the reason why young citizens nowadays are having less tendency to go to old rhythmic

concerts

or decide to play

this

genre of

music

is widely acknowledged, encouraging them to try in

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intriguing field plays a significant role

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their well-being. Evidently, classical

music

concerts

can help listeners to be more calm and patient.

Moreover

, people who pursue old

music

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instruments are more innovative and confident than others. Due to these redeeming features, it is reasonable to inspire youngsters to be excited about attending classical melody

concerts

or

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. In conclusion,

although

the newness in

music

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industry makes only a small number of the young go to classical

music

concerts

or play old instruments, inspiring them to try on

this

field can provide tremendous benefits for their well-being.