In many parts of the world girls and boys are educated together in co-educational or mixed schools. Some people think that girls and boys benefit from being educated separately in single-sex schools. To what extent do you agree with this view?
Most of the people believe that nowadays most of the
of the
colleges and Remove the redundancy
apply
schools
educating both the sex
in same
school, While others claim that Change the article
the same
students
will benefit if they studied in single
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single-sex
sex
school rather than mixed. I partially agree with this
statement for educating in mixed schools
give more equity within girls and boys, while studying separately provide un wanted
relationship within both the Correct your spelling
unwanted
sex
.
Firstly
, I am writing about the important
of being part of mixed Replace the word
importance
schools
. This
will gives
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give
understand
and the quality of trust between Wrong verb form
understanding
students
. This
I mean, students
can understand each other well and can be help-full, also
this
teaches them how to behave with a boy or girl and most of the chance student will get to know more about their pain and problems and this
will lead to understand
more about their parents and siblings. Change the verb form
understanding
For example
, nowadays if you look internationally many of us have mixed friends and we know how to treat them in a way
Secondly
, the advantage of being study in single
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single-sex
sex
schools
. Add an article
the behavior
behavior
between Change the spelling
behaviour
students
will sometimes will
cross the limit and they will not concentrate on their studies. Here what I Remove a modal verb
apply
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towant
want
say is that if a girl and boy Correct your spelling
won't
wants
to study together parent will not allow them because they know the consequence. most of the Change the verb form
want
students
went wrong because of mixed schools
in many places around the world. For
example
nowadays can real many newspapers convey Add a comma
,example
students
in a relationship in grade five itself and these kids will not understand what their doing is correct or wrong.
In conclusion, educating students
in mixed school teach them the important
and value of Replace the word
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verieties
of people, Correct your spelling
varieties
However
studying in Add a comma
,However
single
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single-sex
sex
college or schools
will bring more culture disicipline
between the Correct your spelling
discipline
students
. in my opinion
both of the Add a comma
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system
have their unique way of Change to a plural noun
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and Fix the agreement mistake
advantages
disadvantage
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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- however
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- even though
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