some people believe that a greater difference in age between parents and children is more beneficial than less of a difference. Do you think the advantages of a greater age difference outweigh the disadvantages?

Over the
last
two or three decades, late marriage has been raising tremendously than ever before;
as a result
,
parents
and
children
have a huge ade
difference
.
However
, some think that a huge
age
difference
between
parents
and kids is more
adavandages
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advantages
rather than a minimum
age
difference
. I think
this
trend has more drawbacks than benefits,
this
essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
To begin
wiht
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with
, a huge
age
difference
between fathers and mothers and kids have more disadvantages.
Firstly
,
this
can lead to being a generation gap between them;
thus
, mutual understanding might be missed
betwen
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between
them.
Secondly
,
these kind
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of
parents
will be old when theirs'
children
will
be enter
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in teenage;
thus
, sometimes they cannot live more years with theirs'
infants
due to elder diseases.
In addition
, after one certain
age
,
children
look after theirs'
parents
when
infants
be
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are
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in teenage, and
therefore
,
infants
cannot be delighted to theirs'
life
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.
For example
, in
the
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western nations people marry after
fourty
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forty
.
Thus
, many
children
live with single parent
mother
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mothers
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or
father
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fathers
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due to elder
age
diseases affect theirs'
parents
.
Therefore
,
this
trend gives more disadvantages.
On the other hand
, a huge
age
difference
has some benefits for both fathers and
infants
.
First
,
parents
have more assets because they save more money for theirs' future after
got
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getting
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married;
thus
, financial burdens do not disturb theirs' life.
Second
,
parents
and
children
have a mutual relationship
maintain
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because
parents
have more maturity, and
therefore
, they can
effortlessely
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effortlessly
understand about theirs' little buds needs and wants.
For instance
,
in
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Indian
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Indians
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also
have a huge
age
difference
between theirs' little ones, but they can live a happy life rather than a minimum
age
difference
families
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in families
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.
Hence
,
this
situation has some benefits. To conclude, a great
age
gap between
parents
and toddlers can lead to getting misunderstanding and
children
cannot live happy in their teenage; they have more financial
assests
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assets
and maintain good
reltionship
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relationship
relationships
between them.
Therefore
, I think
this
process has more disadvantages than advantages.
Submitted by reanudeepan on

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