People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?

Over the
last
two or three decades, people
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students enter college has been
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tremendously than ever before due to numerous employment opportunities are available.
However
, students attend
universities
for countless causes, I think getting
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,
wisdom
, and
experience
too.
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essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
To begin
with, graduates would like to enter
colleges
because they will be gotten
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good employment and a handsome salary package too, and
therefore
, they go to university for their higher
studies
. In college
also
studies
and prepares to graduates for job industry; their study
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curriculum
also
designs for preparing for a particular
work based
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.
For example
,
in
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india
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has numerous
colleges
, polytechnic and
universities
for
pupils
will be learned to work-related
such
as pre-demo for
career
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a career
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.
This
reason for countless adult people who
likes
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to higher
studies
enter
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to
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colleges
.
Furthermore
,
colleges
not only
trains
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pupils
for career preparation but
also
provides countless
of
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wisdom
towards a particular subject;
thus
, they can be enhanced to their knowledge. Some
pupils
study
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higher education
for
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will be done research in their special skill and will be
gooten
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gotten
more
experience
towarads
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towards
the education undoubtedly.
For instance
, Australians attend
minimum
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amount of college because
of
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their nation has more employment chances for all citizens, but they would like to attend higher education only for getting more
wisdom
and
experience
too.
This
is the
reasons
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for students go to
universities
. To conclude, higher
studies
can enhance their knowledge,
wisdom
,
carrer
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career
training and
experience
undoubtedly, and
hence
, countless people like to go for
universities
. I think these are the essential causes for
pupils
enter in
colleges
, I hope
this
process is
condicive
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conducive
to making numerous scholars to around the world.
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