In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles would be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

There has been an agreement that automated
vehicles
will be the mainstream of transportation in the upcoming days. Many people agree that it is beneficial to our future society, while others remain sceptical about it. In
this
essay, I will explain the reason why I think the benefits of
driverless
car
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outweigh the detriments since it reduces the waste of
time
during
traveling
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and
prevents
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the
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traffic
accidents
. It is widely thought that driving is
such
a waste of
time
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during
traffic
jams
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because drivers can’t do anything but drive.
Therefore
, many citizens believe that the invention of self-driving
vehicles
is necessary so that they can do other things while
traveling
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.
However
, a part of the population think
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vehicular automation decreases the pleasure of
traveling
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, they enjoy the process of driving. From my perspective, autonomous cars can be a choice, if people want to reduce
wasting
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time
they can start the automated mode, and if individuals would like to drive by themselves, just turn off the mode.
On the other hand
, reducing the rate of car
accidents
is another major reason why we produce
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driverless
vehicles
. It has been reported that the intact system of car automation can significantly and effectively decrease
traffic
accidents
like
over speeding
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and alcohol driving.
However
, many countries have witnessed a few collisions of
driverless
cars, and the negative image is ingrained in some people’s
mind
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. Actually, the rate of traditional driving
accidents
still considerably exceeds
driverless
vehicles
. I believe that if the system becomes more intact, it is definitely better than
the
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traditional driving in terms of avoiding
traffic
accidents
.
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automation is a big issue that there are still a lot of arguments in
this
day and age.
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my opinion, its advantages outweigh the disadvantages regarding the more efficient use of
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time
and the prevention of
traffic
accidents
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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