Some people think that cars are the best way to travel in a city, while others think that bicycles are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In the 21st century,
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like to migrate from rural areas to urban areas
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, their mode of transportation changed a lot. Resultantly, some
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argued that cars are most suitable for city travelling but others contended that bicycles are
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preferred choice. In
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essay, I will explain both sides with relevant examples . Technological advancement generates numerous changes in the field of car manufacturing
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as safety measurement, proper speed ratio and the comfortability of travelling in urban areas.
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,these significant facilities provide enormous benefits for professionals because they can reach their office correct time and can travel
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places in cities without any difficulties.
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, it will facilitate family get together easily because most of the public transport
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filled with many
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and they cannot arrive at
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time due to traffic problems. To support
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, According to the Delhi road and safety 2019 report mentioned that 75% of city holders supported private cars for their convenient use
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of other means of transportation. In
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way,
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discovery of car transportation creates more advantages in the life of city
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. There are many
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benefits
vested to the use of
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, it is more adaptive for environment protection because
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of cities
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filled with air pollution.
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, in Denmark 75% of local
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extensively
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bicycles
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of other fuel
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. Reportedly, these systems reduced more than 50% of carbon emissions in Denmark crowded places .
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,it prevents traffic problems because
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private
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results
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more road safety and proper functioning.
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, lack of exercise is the main problem facing urban
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while using
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generates physical fitness and mental relaxation.
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key things to remember holding private
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are very expensive especially in
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a busy
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lifestyle because
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that bicycle is more helpful for balancing
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statement of individuals. In conclusion, there is a saying 'a coin has two sides'
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using
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provide constructive and destructive changes in our life.
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, whoever
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these things make sure that it will
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for their cities as well as their life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • commuting
  • adverse weather conditions
  • developed highway systems
  • personal space
  • time-efficient
  • safety and security features
  • environmentally friendly
  • air and noise pollution
  • healthier lifestyle
  • cost-effective
  • maintenance costs
  • congested city areas
  • navigate
  • traffic jams
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