In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Crime
movies
and stories (
crime
fiction
books
) are undoubtedly (indubitably) becoming a very common phenomenon that can be observed in different places around the world. Regardless of age or
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hometown, you will observe a variety of people are sharing the same interest and got attracted to read
crime
fiction
books
and
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crime related
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movies
. In
this
essay I will explain some possible reasons
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behind the widespread of
this
habit along with my opinion about (robbery and murdering) criminal act related media.
Firstly
, we have to admit that it is the nature
humankind
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to get attached to the idea of justice
fulfillment
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and that justice should eventually be applied regardless of the consequences, and that (cons) outlaws and
criminals
ought to be caught, brought to the court, prosecuted and incarcerated, these type of media always stressing
this
idea, and the course of events through the
books
or
movies
is following the same path, which definitely
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audiences and
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their expectations.
Secondly
, the fact that during the
movies
or the book progression,
author
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always
give
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the touch of thrill and suspense which get the reader attached more and more to finish the book or the movie till the end. Adding to that,
sometime
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audiences
feels
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that the story is representing and touching their life or at least captures and embodies some scenes or moments of it,
thus
they
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more attached. Well, I believe that some
of
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crime
fiction
books
and films as everything in our life has its own positive and negative sides, positive points can be summarized in the following points, the
books
and
movies
are always end
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by turning
criminals
in and being prosecuted and punished, which emphasizes the point that regardless of the
crime
committed, robbers and
criminals
will always
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and
this
act as a deterrent to criminal,
therefore
it can be counted as a proactive measure, in the other hand, negative points may arise, as adolescence and adults, may find the
crime
as an easy approach to build a fortune by committing robberies and
crime
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acts.
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, criminal related publications and films will remain very popular and even will get common more and more, it should always be used in a positive way that
serve
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the community and
to
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always shows and reflect the consequences of committing crimes and how justices will eventually be fulfilled no matter how long it takes, or how small the
crime
is,
Crime
act will remain always illegal and
criminals
will always be punished.
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