In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some
people
believe that the existence of printed newspapers
or books
will out
of the market in the future Add a missing verb
be out
due to
the accessibility of online reading materials
without spending any money on it. However
, I strongly disagree with the statement due to
the different skills of automation usage between old and young generations as well as
person's
desire Correct article usage
a person's
in reading
.
First and foremost, old society finds it hard to read Change preposition
to read
books
or newspapers
virtually due to
their physical condition and skill in using the
Correct article usage
apply
technology
. In other words
, books
and newspapers
are needed
to be printed for these generations so they can cope with the recent pieces of information. Wrong verb form
need
For example
, my grandparents find it struggle
to read the information even from the television Correct article usage
a struggle
due to
their eyes are not sufficient enough to read everything from the screen. They get used to the
printed Correct article usage
apply
books
and reading materials
so they found
it even harder if they need to read everything online. Wrong verb form
find
Besides
, technology
is not something that they are familiar with hence
this
will bring
another issue Verb problem
cause
Fix the infinitive
to arises
arises
. Correct subject-verb agreement
arise
Therefore
, no matter how advanced and affordable the technology
towards the existence of reading materials
, some people
will keep buying printed books
or newspapers
in the future including my grandparents.
Secondly
, personal preference in reading creates many possibilities whether the reading materials
are available online or offline. What I am trying to say is that everyone has their own way of choosing the most convenient way to read, so it can be hard if the market is
only Verb problem
apply
having
one option; online reading. Wrong verb form
has
Moreover
, some societies tend to enjoy reading printed books
compared to virtual ones ,especially for parents. My parents, for instance
, never brought any virtual book
at home or at Fix the agreement mistake
books
the
reading time because they tried to minimize the use of gadgets for their children. So, despite its personal choice, it is Correct article usage
apply
also
another benefit in
reading Change preposition
of
hard copy
Add a hyphen
hard-copy
books
or newspapers
.
In conclusion, I strongly disagree that no one will buy printed books
or newspapers
in the future because old people
find it hard to read on-screen and personal's
preference. Change noun form
personal
Instead
, it will be more people
who prefer to read in a traditional way to decrease their frequency in
using the Change preposition
of
technology
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Grammatical Accuracy
There are some language errors, such as 'the existence of printed newspapers or books will out of the market', which should be 'printed newspapers or books will be out of the market'. Also, be careful with your sentence structures. For example, 'my grandparents find it struggle to read the information', which should be 'my grandparents struggle to read the information'.
Task Fulfillment
It would be better to give more statistical or factual evidence to further strengthen your supporting arguments.