The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, governments are trying their best approach to improve
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. While some groups said that there should be strict punishments for offences and
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the only option to enhance road
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. I totally agree with
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statement because
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will teach them a valuable lesson and
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let them understand the importance of their and
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's
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, as said by
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that punishments are necessary to let
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obey the rules and because that
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only way they can learn the valuable lesson.
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is the best way to let them understand that money power doesn't matter if the government decide to stop an accident and increase the
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of people.
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, The UK government implemented a law that if any crosses the decided limit they have to face consequences which basically start from the minimal amount of charges to the death penalty
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is all because they want to stop
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and enhance road
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. So with ,that they fear to cross the limit which was implemented by the officials.
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, with the strict penalties may they get the knowledge and understand the meaning of
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is because they are driving fast because that way they can impress
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but sometimes they may lose own but they may put
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else
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in danger too. So if a person or their loved one tell them the importance of
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then
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maybe stop doing that and do safe driving for the betterment of themselves and
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for others too.
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, the officials started holder with advertisements to let people teach the value of
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and how much they are worth in
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world. To conclude, I strongly agree with
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notion because it basically helps them to learn many lessons and
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guide in the right path through their loved one than maybe they learn the value of
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.
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