People are surrounded by advertising, which has an increasing effect on our lives. People are surrounded by advertising, which has an increasing effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effects of this outweigh the negative effects?
Every people purchase the items which they see more often. Some people think that the advertising of mobile and they don't the feature and costs of it
products
has an adverse
Correct the article-noun agreement
an adverse effect
adverse effects
effects
on our lives. In this
essay, we will discuss how the positive effects
are covering up the negative effects
.
Firstly
, let's discuss the positive side of advertising as we see that some products
which we use daily and suddenly they come to our eyes through newspapers or televisions catch the attention of it. Some products
like furniture or any electronics gadgets which we are planning to buy and have no idea about the quality or discount offer at that time the marketing plays a vital role. For example
, if anyone wants to purchaseCorrect article usage
a
then
it becomes very difficult to find which mobile is perfect and due to ,this
we choose the wrong device and regret
.
Correct pronoun usage
itregret
However
, there is
some disadvantages which mostly affects our lives like the advertisement of some adult content on television which has major Change the verb form
are
effects
on children watching it. This
kind of advertisement during early ages make a heavy impact on the brain. For example
, if any child is watching some cartoon on the internet and suddenly there is a condom ad is getting played and they started asking questions about what is this
and what its
are uses Change the pronoun
it
of
it.
In conclusion, I feel that there is some positive side of advertisement which can be used for the good Change preposition
apply
products
in the markets and according to that
we can decide which items Add a comma
,that
is
good for us.Change the verb form
are
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