Many people today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the solutions?

Most of them believe that there is no protection for

people

whether at residence or outside.

However

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this

is because of the increase in

violence

and

also

many

people

living alone.

This

essay will look at the core reasons for

this

and propose some solid solutions.

First

of all, One of the main causes of the problem is that nowadays

violence

increase in all parts of the world. By ,

this

I mean robberies and psycho killers have been increasing since covid-19

therefore

people

feel unsafe most of the time.

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, When I was working at a convenience store, a robbery came and kept a knife at me, and I was surprised to see

this

in developed countries and I have not been working at a convenience store since

this

incident. The proper solution for

this

is that to increase the punishments and install security cameras. If punishment is something siver

people

will be scared to do illegal activities.

For instance

, in the world very

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violence

recorded

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in the middle east compared to other developed and peaceful countries

this

because of the way they punish the criminals.

Second

of all, another problem is that many

people

live alone in many countries. Nowadays the way of life has changed a lot,

therefore

people

choose to live alone in a different country without any relatives. if someone like

this

sometimes thinks that they're alone and have no one to protect them

this

mental behaviour forces them

to

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scared to go outside and feel unsafe at home. For

an

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, When I came to New Zealand I was living alone

this

sometimes feels very unsecured while saw different

people

with different attitudes even I thought not go out sometimes because of mental fear. To tackle

this

issue

people

should find someone they can trust and explain their situation

this

could be the better solution for

this

problem. In conclusion, It can be clearly seen that many

violence

has increased these days compared to previous years and

also

many of them prefer to

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their life alone make

this

will make them little unsecured feel,

therefore

,

therefore

punishment should be increased and

people

should find someone to stay together in their lifetime for each mental health.