You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Dear Mr Philips, I am writing

this

letter to invite you and your family to be at my inaugural

party

in the neighbourhood. Let me start by introducing myself. I am your new neighbour, from 25 Bridgeway Street, and I have been recently relocated from Montreal to here, in order to help my company in the development of the new office in town. As for my plans for the

party

, considering that I have just arrived and barely know the people around here, it would be a good start for me to get to know my new neighbours and new colleagues at work. So, the

party

will be very informal, with some beers and finger food.

Thus

, I would like to kindly ask if you and your family would be willing to come. The

party

will be

Friday, starting at 6pm. Please let me know if you have any allergies. I look forward to hearing a positive response from you. Yours sincerely, Christina

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8 paragraphs

164 words

8.50

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Clear and correct grammar

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