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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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There are different views about how a government can manage a
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country
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’s
progress
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. Some people think that economic
progress
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 is essential for
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country’s
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 success, while others believed that
progress
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 in other
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 is as important as economic
progress
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. I think that economic growth is a key marker for each
country
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. On the one hand,
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 in some areas
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 as health and education plays a key role in a
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country
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’s development. Education
progress
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 in a
country
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 results in increasing the number of educated people whom
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country
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 can benefit from their knowledge and experience and social welfare will be increased. Health
progress
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 is another important area in a
country
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 that
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 in having more healthy citizens and a decrease in the rate of illness.
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, healthy people as a workforce can work harder and have more efficiency for the
country
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 and it leads to a strong
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.
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, economic progression plays an undeniable role in the development of a
country
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 because it is a footstone for other important sectors. There are three main reasons behind the importance of economic progression.
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, healthy
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 results in job creation, higher level of employment may lead to
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 level of people’s life.
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, economic growth provides more money for the government to spend on infrastructure and public service.
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, improving
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 transportation system can help citizens to commute more convenient to and from their work,
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 may have a great impact on their productivity as an essential component of community economic development.
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, a strong
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 helps a
country
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 stand on the global stage which brings about strong political influence and trading power. In conclusion,
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 progression in other areas
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 as education and health is important in developing a
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, the
economy
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 obviously is a key factor of a
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country
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’s success.
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  • technological innovation
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