Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are different views about how a government can manage a

country

’s

progress

. Some people think that economic

progress

is essential for

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success, while others believed that

progress

in other

area

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is as important as economic

progress

. I think that economic growth is a key marker for each

country

. On the one hand,

progress

in some areas

such

as health and education plays a key role in a

country

’s development. Education

progress

in a

country

results in increasing the number of educated people whom

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country

can benefit from their knowledge and experience and social welfare will be increased. Health

progress

is another important area in a

country

that

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in having more healthy citizens and a decrease in the rate of illness.

Consequently

, healthy people as a workforce can work harder and have more efficiency for the

country

and it leads to a strong

economy

.

On the other hand

, economic progression plays an undeniable role in the development of a

country

because it is a footstone for other important sectors. There are three main reasons behind the importance of economic progression.

First

, healthy

economy

results in job creation, higher level of employment may lead to

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the

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level of people’s life.

Second

, economic growth provides more money for the government to spend on infrastructure and public service.

For example

, improving

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transportation system can help citizens to commute more convenient to and from their work,

this

may have a great impact on their productivity as an essential component of community economic development.

Finally

, a strong

economy

helps a

country

stand on the global stage which brings about strong political influence and trading power. In conclusion,

although

progression in other areas

such

as education and health is important in developing a

country

, the

economy

obviously is a key factor of a

country

’s success.