Some people say History is one of the important school subjects. Other think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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day and age many people argue that
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should play the main role in education while others assume that
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subjects as
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and Technology are more useful and helpful for students. In
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I will discuss both statements and explain why I am sure that
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is still the most important.
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of all, people cannot make progress without knowledge about their past. The
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includes human’s success and mistakes and
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results of our activity. Of course, everybody cannot be expert in all historical events but general knowledge about the
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spaceman who reached space in 1961,
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, provides us with information on how
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event was prepared and the role of
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historical facts are the biggest motivator for researchers, which open
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new ideas to develop
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and technology in the future.
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, technology and
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are around us and we should familiar with them to have a comfortable life. Knowledge about electricity,
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, help us every day to prepare our meal by the oven or commute by metro, electro bus, electro cars. But we should remember that all these features have a historical background. In conclusion,
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we are living in a technological era and
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is went into our living very deep, we are a part of the world society and our
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is the most important part of our life. I strictly believe that we should look at the human past and with the assistance of historical facts build our best future.
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