You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Dear Sir, I am Ezgi Koçak, I had stayed in your hotel
at
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last
Tuesday for only three days. I had brought with me
to
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my master graduate
term
paper
to study whenever I had found a time. Unfortunately, I have realized that I had
forgot
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forgotten

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my documents in front of the bed
at
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in

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the hotel room. I need to finish my
term
paper
because
of
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my deadline will be at the end of
this
month. If I do not submit my
term
paper
, I will fail the course.
This
year I want to be graduate from my study because
of
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I want to start working full time. I want to ask you, is it possible to send my
term
paper
with
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by

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courier
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the courier

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? You do not have to pay anything, I will organize and pay expenses I would be very
appreciated
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If you send my
term
paper
. Thank you so much. Sincerely, Ezgi Koçak
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