Modern lifestyles are completely different from the way people lived in the past. Some people think the changes have been very positive, while others believe they have been very negative. Discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion

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There is no doubt that technology has changed our life.some individuals comment that these
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others think that it is negative.in my point of view despite, some drawbacks in
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. On the one hand, there are many advantages to these
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,especially education. impact some years ago
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only used books and face to face classes for their studies but current days many study materials and instruments have discovered.
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can get more knowledge through these.
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if student correct their practice tests they don't get help from others and they can find the answer through the technology apps
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, they are some disadvantages that.due to the new building appearance, many trees are cut down by
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some birds and animals live suffered much as well
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have to face many problems,
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if many car usages in cities , which release annoying sounds it affects the human rest times To sum up
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, we can get several benefits for these.
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movement should stop cut down trees.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Technological advancements
  • Globalization
  • Cultural exchange
  • Nuclear family
  • Extended family
  • Life expectancy
  • Healthcare improvements
  • mental health
  • Environmental degradation
  • Traditional family structures
  • Industrialization
  • Urbanization
  • Consumption patterns
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