Q: Some people say that at all levels of education, from primary school to university, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

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argued that education is primarily composed of theoretical subjects , rather than practices.
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, professors and lecturers do not concentrate on improving
skills
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and often provide
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volume of data and figures. I agree with
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of most people and
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will explain in
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paragraphs. Studying thesis knowledge is an important prospect
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essential for
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a child
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to learn but it should be backed up by real examples and practical knowledge of daily
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.
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, apart from
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,classes
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there should be sessions
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include puzzles and physical work to improve the mental strength of learners.
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, it is very important that students should relate or apply the concepts they learn at school
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in
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life
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scenarios which will
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improve
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thinking capabilities at
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young age.
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, even at
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the university
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level teaching stuff should be related to
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the corporate
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world so it could help the student to get
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job or in their business.
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, learning a computer language won’t be enough unless there is
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a proper
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practice session involved.
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to
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, we have often seen job applicants who are very good at academics but due to lack of
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skills
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,skills
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they got rejected in the interviews.
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, candidates which are lack
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apply
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interpersonal and communication
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are always considered as weak pillars of the organisation. In conclusion, learning about facts and concepts is useful only if students
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how to apply them in different situations.
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, educational institutions
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sure that mentors and teachers will equally support soft
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, analytical thinking and
problem solving
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problem-solving
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session of
real
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life
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with relevant examples.
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