Companies should provide sport and social facilities for local communities. To what extend do you agree?

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is currently a contentious argument over whether amenities associated with exercising and social affairs ought to be provided by the local businesses for people who live in that area. I totally disagree with

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idea due to a vast range of reasons which some of these motives will be addressed in

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essay. The main reason why I do not believe

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idea is because

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issue is counted as one

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most essential responsibilities of the government.

In other words

, companies pay

tax

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in order to help the state to improve the amenity and the infrastructures of the country.

Consequently

, they properly fulfil their duties by paying tax.

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, in Iran, there is a specific item in corporations' taxes

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directly indicates that it will be used for

improvement

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of local conditions. Another reason why I strongly dispute

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notion is based on the fact that in

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contemporary competitive business market, companies have to

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on their professional duties for surviving. If firms spend a marked amount of their resources on developing the local area, it might contribute to their bankruptcy and thousands of job opportunities can disappear.

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, in

Iran

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many small businesses are struggling with an unbelievable enormous amount of tax, whilst they are expected to fund local projects associated with sports and social events.

Therefore

, the number of bankrupted corporations has been increasing recently. In conclusion,

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it is a common belief that local firms should financially support the social affairs and

sport

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facilities in their neighbourhood, I completely disagree with

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notion because it is one of the state's tasks and is not affordable for corporations.