DISCUSS WHEN, IF EVER, CAPITAL PUNISHMENT – THE DEATH PENALTY – CAN BE VIEWED AS A VALID PUNISHMENT FOR CRIME
To many people, capital
punishment
is detestable, but it is practicable to view it as a reasonable means of punishment
. In my point of view, death
penalty can be justified if some Add an article
the death
conditions
are present. In this
essay, I like to discuss these conditions
in more details
. The rules and laws of Fix the agreement mistake
detail
society
are made for the purpose of protecting its members. If anyone made opposite
action to these rules and laws Correct article usage
the opposite
then
death
penalty may be Correct article usage
the death
only
answer. For instance, Correct article usage
the only
the
murder that has been committed is so disgusting that Correct word choice
if the
society
cannot allow the criminal back into its fold, then
the death
warrant may be the only answer. In the other condition, if the offender shows no guilt and is not capable of feeling any shame for his horrible actions, then
the only solution may be death
. In these scenario
, it is clear that the criminal cannot be Change the determiner
this scenario
these scenarios
rehab
. Wrong verb form
rehabbed
Third
important consideration is that if Add an article
A third
The third
offender
is guilty after his crime act, Add an article
the offender
an offender
then
it is important to make sure to the best of his ability. If someone is punished with imprisonment and later found to be innocent, he can be released from prison. However
, it is not possible ifCorrect article usage
the
punishment
is death
. Conclusively, I believe that it is necessary to consider three main conditions
. If the crime is so bad that
it would be impossible to accept Correct word choice
apply
criminal
back into Fix the agreement mistake
criminals
society
. There must be no hope and expectation that the offender can ever be rehabilitated to society
and there must be no doubt if criminal
is guilty Add an article
the criminal
a criminal
for
his horrible crime. If any situation does not contain above mentioned Change the preposition
of
conditions
, then
I believe that death
penalty is Correct article usage
the death
morally
wrong Correct article usage
a morally
punishment
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite