The Growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

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raising

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of e-commerce will someday lead to many stores

to be

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bankrupt and

close

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in towns and cities. I strongly agree to some

extend

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that modern technology of

modern

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the modern

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world and having a convenient

life

are

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the

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reason in some manner.

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of all, modern technology

are

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one of the main reason

of

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for

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growing online shopping. Many

programmer

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programmers

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are creating

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an application

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application

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applications

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to help online shopping owner to sell their product and goods.

Programmer

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also

create

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e-pay to pay the transaction.

Basically

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all the

application

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applications

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and software are created with the use of

internet

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the internet

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.

Application

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can easily access by

the

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people

with the use of

computer

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a computer

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or cellphone.

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, Shein is one of

leading

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application

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applications

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for online shopping which they

sale

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clothes, accessories at home and other miscellaneous. As result, many individuals are fond of buying and choosing

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a product

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product

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products

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on

this

application

.

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,

stress free

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life

of shopping is one of the greatest

achievement

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that individuals want. Online shopping

save

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the

people

who had a longer of worker and no time to go out

for

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shopping. Today, pandemic make all the

people

stay at home that lead the physical shops and store to

closed

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and

the

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e-commerce

make

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human

life

much lighter

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that

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than

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before.

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, picking

a

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apply

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clothes or product is just

on

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one

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click from your devices and it will send to you

door steps

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just a matter of time and day.

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,

people

feel

more safe

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to

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apply

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not

going

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out to shop, just

stay

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staying

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at home and

have

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having

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a grocery. In conclusion,

modern

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world increasing

the

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e-commerce and make

life

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the life

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of

people

carefree but it lead to many stores in

town

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towns

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and cities closure.