In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.

I personally think that

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should take proper regulations and control the crime rate rather than imposing

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teenagers. Even though the

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would reduce

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of the parents, that will negatively impact the freedom of the young children.

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of all, the crime rate and the drug usage in cities like

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and Nethal are very high and

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has not taken any steps to reduce it.

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they have imposed

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the common people living there. There was a news item

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month from

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that an 18 years boy got killed in a bar and the reason for the incident is an argument after having drugs. Drug usage is the main reason for most of the crimes happening there, so my opinion is that

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should ban drugs and night parties from these notorious cities.

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, the number of COPS available in these places are very less compared to other cities. The main reason for

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the officials are afraid to do the duties in

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locations as it is life-threatening for them. My opinion is that

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should take more responsibility for

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and post more armed and trained army officials in

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than normal police officials. Considering all these reasons, I believe

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of imposing curfew and

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teenagers, the

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should take necessary steps to control the crime rate. Again these are my personal beliefs, but I will support whatever the

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decides to do. I appreciate the opportunity to provide my input on

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issue.