You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his performance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

Dear sir/madam, I would like to tell you about my experience of your live concert that was really amazing which was not only memorable for me but
also
I learnt a lot from it.
Firstly
, you are the one who is my favourite singer from my musical journey till now. Your voice is magical whenever I listen to your songs, I am always lost in the song and the best thing about your song is the composition of the
music
. Every song has a unique concept which I never found in other singers
music
.
Secondly
, I am
also
a
music
learner so, I want a favour from your side if you guide me about my
music
like my strengths and weaknesses so that, I can improve them and become a successful singer in upcoming future like you.
Lastly
, as I previously said I improve myself by listening to you and the valuable tips which you have given once's your interview,which I have tried to implement in my life. Even you give any small pieces of advice to your fans I always take them seriously. I
also
made some compositions by own self when I got a chance I will share them with you. At
last
, I am looking for a positive reply from your side. Yours sincerely, Rohit
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