Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
 To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Household
waste
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since it is not reprocessed adequately. Currently, there are many speaks about measures that authorities can do to make an increment of family garbage recycled. Especially, declaring it as
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new legislation to force
people
to recycle is believed to be the only way that could help the situation.
However
, from my viewpoint, I just partly agree with
this
statement. On the one hand, a legal requirement in reprocessing
waste
can be a promising approach to the problems of
waste
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household
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. It is obvious that something simple after
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into a legal obligation will grab more attention from
people
and they
also
take it with more serious consideration.
This
measure would act as a deterrent and encourage
people
not only to obey the recycling law but
also
to build a good habit of protecting the environment around them.
Furthermore
, the raised awareness of homeowners to recycle could lead to a clean,
waste
-free environment for everyone to live in.
On the other hand
, it can not be said that a new legal regulation about
household
rubbish is the only way to make
people
recycle more. It can be solved by many other tactics and education
also
plays a crucial role in
this
process.
For example
, children should be taught about recycling at school, and the adults, who are homeowners, can
also
be informed about the environmental impact of
household
waste
in their
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.
Moreover
, money should
also
be spent by the authorities to improve recycling facilities and systems, so that
waste
is processed more effectively, regardless of whether or not
people
separate it correctly in the home.
In addition
, announcing a new recycling law can help to make an increment of family garbage reused, but there are
also
other ways that can bring the same influence
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or even more superior.
Besides
, I personally think that if everyone, both governments and residents join
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together, the problems about our environment can be tackled more easily.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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