People tend to more likely buying a residential property instead of renting one in some regions. The reasons can be both economically, emotionally and other factors. I personally believe this is a positive situation

In general,
public
Add an article
the public
show examples
are
Change the verb form
is
show examples
more favourite in buying a mansion out of economical considerations. Including the population who bought the residence for their own use or investment.
For instance
, people may find it is more beneficial for them to buy a dwelling rather than renting one because the month’s mortgage or the rent can be approximately the same.
Furthermore
, the amount of effort or time of renovation and decoration should
also
be counted into the cost of owning or renting a living place. Other than that, some people intend to make a profit by investing their money into the housing business, especially in some world-class cities where the house price rockets up rapidly,
such
as New York, London and Shanghai. Whereas,
this
may lead to a problem that more and more young people are not able to afford to buy a house in those cities. As for the emotional benefits for folk owning a condo in terms of having a big sense of belonging and less stress. Compare to those who rent a dwelling, the ones who bought a home tend to live in the neighbourhood for a longer period of time and they do not have concerns about being evicted by the landlord and moving around as tenants, which can cause stress and affect the quality of life.
As a result
, they are more likely to develop a bond with their neighbours and earn a good reputation in the community. To conclude, the advantages of owning a house is far more than that of renting one in terms of great financial opportunities and personal emotional benefits.
Submitted by 280164922 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: