People live longer today and so people should stay in the workforce. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

The average life expectancy has shot up from 26 years at the turn of the century to 74 years today.
Hence
, there is an obvious demand to increase the retirement age limit, so that experienced
people
can continue working. I do not fully agree with
this
demand and in the following paragraphs, I will justify my views.
Firstly
, there is a good case for senior but
otherwise
healthy
people
to continue working.
Thus
, they will contribute to the economy and not be a burden.
Also
, the relative worth of an experienced employee is very high for any company and
this
collective wisdom is very important for the company's growth. But, there is a cost for
this
experience. Most of the senior
people
hold the higher rungs of leadership, and
thus
young, enthusiastic leaders do not get promoted in time.
This
breeds resentment in the organization.
For instance
, 'young Turks, of the Indian National Congress broke away to form a separate party, as they were not allowed leadership roles.
Secondly
, aged
people
become risk-averse.
Hence
, these seniors do not take bold decisions which are needed for companies to survive in a dynamic world with cut-throat competition.
For example
, the Tata group of companies was slowly stagnating away due to primitive management policies. A young Ratan Tata took over and steered a new course of success for the company. To summarize, we need to exploit the wisdom of the elders and at the same time give
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to the youngsters. In my humble opinion, the best way forward is to form consultative bodies of seniors and executive bodies of juniors.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • life expectancy
  • financial resources
  • retirement fund
  • cognitive functions
  • social interaction
  • wealth of experience
  • expertise
  • social security systems
  • dependency ratio
  • employers
  • adapt workplaces
  • job retraining
  • flexible working hours
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