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More Children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience.

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No doubt, the lifestyle of urban cities is considered major trouble, specifically for
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's health. Allowing more fast food is becoming the main issue of
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's obesity. I will definitely the main reasons and impacts of
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 tendency in the upcoming paragraphs . In
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 fast-paced life , parents do not have more time to prepare food at home because of their hectic schedule and stressful life , due to
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 child having to take junk foods.
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, today's both parents want to do the job to fulfil their all needs. Owing to
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, they spend more hours on working place as well as do not have time to make tiffin and they allow to
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 do lunch at school's canteen and eat junk foods
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 as burger, pizza and they find it tastier.
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,
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 oily food has become the reason for
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's obesity
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 playing indoor
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 one of the
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 reasons of overweight, as
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 like to play video
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 on the computer or mobile phones and do not want to play outdoor
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 or any physical
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,
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 lack of exercise and sitting multiple hours can enhance the health issues for young ones.
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, a few years ago,
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 play in the streets or playgrounds with friends and do multiple
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 because of gadgets video
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 find more interesting for them, they are deprived of outdoors
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 and welcome overweight problems. In conclusion, lack of
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 and street foods is the main reason for
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's obesity and it is happening because of the hectic schedule of their parents.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • obesity
  • sedentary
  • caloric intake
  • processed foods
  • fast food culture
  • screen time
  • metabolic disorders
  • healthcare expenditure
  • lifestyle diseases
  • preventative strategies
  • nutritional education
  • public health policy
  • body mass index (BMI)
  • emotional well-being
  • stigmatization
  • exercise regimen
  • eating habits
  • junk food
  • socioeconomic factors
  • health literacy
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