Nowadays many people change jobs regularly rather than working in the one company for their entire career

It is argued that
people
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prefer changing jobs regularly, rather than staying in
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company
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. Nowadays there are so many companies with different purposes and different qualities that they look for an employee.
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it is very difficult for a person to find the
right
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job
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for them.
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means that
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they are going to quit that
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and find a better
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I'm going to talk about why
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One
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reason why
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happens is
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the
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doesn'
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meet their expectations.
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they don'
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wake up with excitement to go to work. Which causes them to not do the work properly like they're supposed to because they don'
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enjoy it.
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leads to problems with the boss which
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causes stress. Unless that stress is reduced that person is going to want to quit that
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.
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my brother used to work at a
company
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for the
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time and he was very excited at
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. But after he started working there the
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didn'
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meet his expectations so he was very disappointed.
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the salary was very good he didn'
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care about that because he just didn'
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like the
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. Even though he decided to stay in the
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and give it a
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chance to improve nothing changed so he just decided to quit and try to find a better
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. Another reason why
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keep switching jobs is that they don'
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feel like
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place
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is for them and that they don'
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belong there. What I mean by
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people
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go to their workplace and feel like they don'
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know what to do at any moment. While looking at the others around them and seeing that they know
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what to do it makes them feel very out of
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. I am an example
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that kind of situation. I once worked in a
place
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that
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I just felt horrible while working there. Every day I felt like I don'
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belong there and that
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is not the
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job
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for me ,mainly because I wasn'
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treated
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. Throughout the whole
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my mood was down. And I didn'
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feel happy at all. I felt very tired even without working very much because it was draining me not only physically but emotionally as well . To conclude A solution for
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probably is that companies have to provide their employees with a better environment and not only treat them as workers but as
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as well.
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make them feel wanted and in the
right
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place
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. Rather than making them feel useless and unwanted.

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