Nowadays many people change jobs regularly rather than working in the one company for their entire career

It is argued that
people
prefer changing jobs regularly, rather than staying in
one
company
. Nowadays there are so many companies with different purposes and different qualities that they look for an employee.
Therefore
it is very difficult for a person to find the
right
job
for them.
This
means that
eventually
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they are going to quit that
job
and find a better
one
. In
this
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I'm going to talk about why
this
keeps happening. And what could be done to improve
.
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One
reason why
this
happens is
because
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the
job
doesn'
t
meet their expectations.
Therefore
they don'
t
wake up with excitement to go to work. Which causes them to not do the work properly like they're supposed to because they don'
t
enjoy it.
This
leads to problems with the boss which
also
causes stress. Unless that stress is reduced that person is going to want to quit that
job
.
For
example
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my brother used to work at a
company
for the
first
time and he was very excited at
first
. But after he started working there the
company
didn'
t
meet his expectations so he was very disappointed.
Although
the salary was very good he didn'
t
care about that because he just didn'
t
like the
job
. Even though he decided to stay in the
company
and give it a
second
chance to improve nothing changed so he just decided to quit and try to find a better
one
. Another reason why
people
keep switching jobs is that they don'
t
feel like
this
place
is for them and that they don'
t
belong there. What I mean by
that is
people
go to their workplace and feel like they don'
t
know what to do at any moment. While looking at the others around them and seeing that they know
know
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what to do it makes them feel very out of
place
. I am an example
for
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that kind of situation. I once worked in a
place
that
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I just felt horrible while working there. Every day I felt like I don'
t
belong there and that
this
is not the
right
job
for me ,mainly because I wasn'
t
treated
right
. Throughout the whole
day
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my mood was down. And I didn'
t
feel happy at all. I felt very tired even without working very much because it was draining me not only physically but emotionally as well . To conclude A solution for
this
probably is that companies have to provide their employees with a better environment and not only treat them as workers but as
people
as well.
Also
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make them feel wanted and in the
right
place
. Rather than making them feel useless and unwanted.
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