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Some people believe that education is the key to tackle hunger wordlwide while others feel that the answer is in food aid.

A number of
people
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 argue that
education
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 holds the key in
order
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 to fight
hunger
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 worldwide while another group of
people
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 feels that the ultimate solution is
food
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aid
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.
This
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 essay agrees that
education
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 is the main key in
order
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 to solve
hunger
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 worldwide,
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,will discuss both views. On the
one
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hand
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,
food
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aid
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 is really uncommon since it is moderately harder.In
order
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 to help other countries in case of
hunger
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,there needs to be a group of
people
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 who are willing to help or a government
that is
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also
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 willing to lend their helping
hand
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 which is already hard to attain.
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,there is little to no known cases of solving a country's
hunger
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.To illustrate,Africa suffers the most
hunger
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 problem in our
world
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,but despite ,that no
one
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 is helping Africa since
food
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aid
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 is extremely expensive.
On the other
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hand
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,
education
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 is definitely a major breakthrough in
order
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 to reduce
world
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hunger
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. If a man is well educated
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 they are most likely able to get a job.
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,reducing the amount of homeless or less privileged individuals can easily lessen the rate of the
hunger
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 problem in
one
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 country.Other than that,a well-educated country or society is the
one
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 most likely to offer a helping
hand
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 to other
people
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 since they are well knowledged about
world
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 issues.
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,research has shown about 60% of
hunger
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 problems are centred around illiterate countries. To conclude,despite
food
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aid
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 being an effective solution but
education
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 is the
first
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 and the ultimate key to ending
world
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hunger
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 in a more effective way.

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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