All over the world, societies are facing a growing problems with obesity. This problem effect to the children and adults. What are the reasons for this? and how could it be tackle.

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Obesity

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is a major cause of concern nowadays. In the United States, above 40% of the population suffers from it. It is an important predisposing factor for heart diseases and brain stroke, and

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it needs to be tackled vigorously. In the following paragraphs, we shall examine the reasons for

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and the ways and means to tackle it.

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, let us define

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-anybody with a Body Mass Index of above 70 is considered obese. Due to technological advances,

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have started adopting sedentary lifestyles.

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, we travel by car,

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of walking.

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, we have increased the consumption of processed foods like sugar, cheese, burgers and french-fries etc. These calorie-laden food items do not get digested due to lack of exercise and

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get deposited as fat globules in the body, causing

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. In

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context, how should we tackle

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? The

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is to encourage

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, especially children to play sports

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of playing video games. The

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is to encourage

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to eat home-cooked nutritious meals and avoid junk foods. The

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is to urge governments to fine junk foods with an '

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tax', and run publicity campaigns to popularize a healthy lifestyle. The fourth and the most important

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is to encourage obese

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to shed their

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without feeling guilty or feeling ashamed. In conclusion,

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is a lifestyle disease and needs to be tackled by switching over to a life of moderation and contentment. Health workers, doctors, teachers and counsellors have a vital role in promoting good habits and surveying the changes in the population.

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, with cooperation and a multi-pronged approach, we can overcome the ill effects of

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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problems with obesity. This problem effect to the children and adults. What are the reasons for this? and how could it be tackle.

You have just started a course in a collage which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter: • Introduce yourself • say why you are interested in this sports club • ask some questions about the club

The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion mil be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.

schoole should stop using books for teaching to learn as they find them boring, and use films tv and computer instead. to what extent do you agree with this.