Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People often argue that every

citizens

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have the right to a free

university

education

apart from their financial status. I firmly agree with

this

opinion.

To begin

with, It is a common belief that students should pay

for

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apply

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their own tuition

fee

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fees

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.

This

is

beacuse

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because

,

firstly

,

university

education

is not

compulory

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compulsory

.

In many

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countries have adopted compulsory

education

up to high school based on social agreement. Many societies considered that

higschool

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highschool

high school

education

was sufficient to train members of society. most students get into

university

only for their needs

such

as

learn

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a huge amount of knowledge,

make

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making

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more personal

connection

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connections

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from

diffrent

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different

backgrounds. In addition, A large budget is essential to maintaining the quality of the

university

.

For instance

, France, which maintains a close to free

university

education

, spends more than 20

percent

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per cent

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of

government

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the government

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budget

to

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on

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education

. french citizens have been faced tax

increase

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increases

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due to free-

university

education

.

However

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I believe that it should be

deal

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dealt

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as

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with as

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a fair opportunities issue. In

competitive

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a competitive

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society

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societies

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such

as Korea and Japan, a college diploma is essential for a job. Thereby, most students from low-income

household

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households

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always struggled with

tuiton

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tuition

fee

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fees

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and it continue to

abondon

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abandon

of school work and difficulty to find a job.

Moreover

, it would be

huge

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a huge

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benefit to

nation

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in the long view. The knowledge that can

acquired

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be acquired

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at

university

will give opportunities to grow up as

mature

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citizen and it would be great

compettive

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competitive

competition

in the future. In conclusion,

although

many things need to

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preceded

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precede

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before free-

university

education

, I

belived

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believed

believe

that

goverments

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governments

government

should provide equal chances for everyone.