Climate change is the biggest threat to life on our planet. How accurate this statement is? Are there any other big threats to mankind?

Recent times are witnessing the danger on the life-span of the living creatures of Earth owing to the alterations in the climatic behaviour.
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worse the weather is, the more
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the survival conditions will become leading to the disappearance of marine life, human civilization and corals of the planet .
Although
the extinction of fossils can
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make a person's survival difficult, it will not be much worse than climate change. To commence with, as a consequence of global warming , living beings will get extinct in the future
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deforestation , pollution ,using those tech gadgets which release CFC or methane gas in the air , are escalating the amount of heat trapped in the atmosphere. The rise in the temperature of the habitable planet can melt the
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glaciers at the mountain peaks . When the melted snow will go to the oceans,it will certainly
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the level of water at the ocean surface ,thereby becoming
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drastic disasters
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as floods, tsunamis and many more.These natural calamities not only will kill
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proportion of
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of men and women , but
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people
homeless . Not far behind is the marine life
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sea level would kill both the aquatic animals as well as coral reefs that are mandatory for balancing the ecosystem.
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, due to the destruction of coral reefs at the bay of Malaysia because of recent floods , a lot of aquatic animals died as they lost their shelter.
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another threat , if not major , to
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mankind is the declining ratio of traditional sources of energy. Since , every work requires power to be completed, which comes from burning fossil fuels ,
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these are being used at a rapid pace . Their extinction will
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us with two options, either to rely totally on alternative energy sources or to switch back to the wheel age. As the infinite sources require a lot of technological development to be used commercially ,
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age where living conditions were so harsh. The depression of
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the invaluable fuels forever would bring negativity among
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could be fatal for them.
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Australian scientists have already developed a machine to record the current and future happenings to make it easy for new emerging species about the past of the Earth and the reason
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their death.
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themselves and their existence. In conclusion, while the scarcity of fossil fuels will result in
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dire consequences for
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, the destruction caused by climate change is far more disturbing and is the biggest threat to
people
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Word Count

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ecosystems
  • natural disasters
  • rising sea levels
  • endangerment of species
  • economic implications
  • fishery yields
  • climate change
  • disaster recovery
  • infectious diseases
  • air and water pollution
  • nuclear war
  • pandemics
  • artificial intelligence
  • scope
  • pervasive impact
  • exacerbate
  • resource scarcity
  • disease outbreaks
  • territorial disputes
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