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In many countries, people do not recycle waste materials, such as paper, glass, and cans. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

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Introduction
Recently, an environmental issue related to
waste
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 recycling has not been required in many
countries
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 has been widely focused. In
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 essay, I would discuss the factors of
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 phenomenon and propose a method to solve it.
Body paragraph 1
In my opinion, there are two main factors that result in
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 problem.
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 of all, many
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 not only do not have the technology to manufacture recycling equipment but
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 are too poor to import equipment. Of cause, the technological shortage either results from poverty which is the root cause of
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 problem.
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, in some wealthy
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, recycling
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 materials
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 are ignored. The cause is opposites to it in developing
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. They have the habit of wasting and ignoring recycling because they control the majority of resources over the world.
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 a purpose is harmful to the promotion of recycling
waste
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 materials.
Body paragraph 2
I think that the only method to solve
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 problem is that developed
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 need to take their
responsibilities
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. On the one hand, their governments and residents should pay more attention to environmental protection. Individuals need to be well-advised to recycle
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 materials.
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, wealthy
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 must help poor
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 economically and technologically.
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, the former could invest in infrastructure construction items to boost poor
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' economies or give them recycling equipment directly.
Conclusion
In conclusion, the Earth is our only home. Every country even everyone should work together to solve the environmental problems. The economy, technology and the purpose of recycling play significant roles in spreading
waste
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 recycling.

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