In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case. Do you think this a positive or negativve situation.
In the present era, accommodation is the necessity of everyone. In many countries, more
people
prefer to own their houses
in contrast
to leasing one. This
essay will discuss why it is very important to be an owner of a house
.
As per my view, I think this
preference of people
is positive. First
of all, in some countries
the inflation rate is getting high day y day and Add a comma
,countries
people
are overburdened by imposing different taxes by Government so also
due to inflation the landlords have also
increased rent which creates a disturbance for the people
of middle
and lower class. Add an article
the middle
a middle
Moreover
, the middle and lower range of people
who own their houses
do
not worry about the monthly rent. Change the verb form
does
For
instance
in a recent Add a comma
,instance
survey
Add a comma
,survey
it
found that about 60 % of the community who own homes do not have the pressure of the rent and Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
they saved money in comparison to others who lived in rented houses
. Therefore
owning a house
is very necessary.
Secondly
, the people
who have their own accommodation are safe from any type of problems like they do not have security and they feel safe in their own houses
. Whereas, those people
who reside in rented homes have no privacy and security. Whenever the landlord wants to come or visit his house
, the tenant has no right to restrain him. For example
, in a recent study, almost 30% incidents
of theft and robbery were done in a rented Change preposition
of incidents
house
by the robbers who pretends to be the family members of landlords and looted the tenant. Therefore
, it is the second
main issue that allows me to think it is mandatory for people
to own a house
.
To conclude, I think it is very necessary to own houses
in comparison to rented homes. People
should also
think about owning houses
who prefer rented houses
to save themselves from any trouble or money loss.Submitted by jamshaid.arshad50 on
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