Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone’ life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?/

Everyone at some point in their life has been an Advertisement, it has become inevitable to escape them these days. The question is if they are a positive

part

of our

lives

or not

?

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I, somewhat agree with

this

statement. From my perspective,

Ads

have become a major

part

of our

lives

, whether we watch them on our TVs on YouTube or in the newspaper, they spread awareness of new and current technology

while

also

providing us with information about upcoming sales which could be useful to some

people

. Advertisements can

also

be used to campaign for/against a cause, sending a message to enormous amounts of

people

at once. Advertisements

also

help

people

brainstorm and think of new and creative ways to turn them into customers.

However

,

Ads

have

also

become a negative

part

of

people

's

lives

as they have become too excessive and have

also

become misleading with time. In my opinion, with the rise in technology,

Ads

have become more misleading to gain customers who are naive or don't read the terms and conditions and it becomes hard to differentiate if an advertisement is misleading or not.

Ads

can

also

be used to spread opinions against a certain institution/person because of the influence they have on the general masses.

To conclude

, Advertisements these days have their pros and cons, but I think the number of advantages outweighs the number of cons and have become a positive

part

of our

lives

.