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Road accidents are more frequent these days and claim many lives each year. As a result, some people suggest that drivers should take regular driving tests throughout their lives, rather than one single driving test, to improve the situation. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of repeat driving tests? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Over the two or three decades, road aviation has been rising tremendously than ever before due to the population and less quality of driving
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.
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, many think that
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 should be taken
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 driving
assessment
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, and
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 the accidents rates. I think
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 has more benefits that outweigh the drawbacks.
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 statement. One of the major benefits is that regular driving
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test
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tests
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 can be enhanced the
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drivers
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driver
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skill
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 and continuously assessment might be
driver
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 update in trendy rules, and
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, road accidents might be diminished.
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, India has a new
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 for
drivers
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 should renewal to their
driver
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 licence
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within
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 five-year period, and
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,
road
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 accident rate decreases tremendously than ever before. Another major benefit is that
,
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 situation can be avoided illegal activities
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 as sometimes many people give some money to getting
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driver
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 license.
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, there are many drawbacks of getting
regular
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test
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 method. One of the main disadvantages is that
this
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 kind of
test
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 gives more
frastration
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frustration
 who are the
drivers
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;
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, they might be done small accidents. Another main drawback is that
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regualar
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regular
 driving
test
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 can be taken more time for updating
test
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report
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,
meanwhile
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 the
drivers
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 cannot drive continuously.
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in
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many European nations has
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their
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drivers
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 skills,
that
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and
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, many
drivers
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a
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time to update
to
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their licence since the new
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 was introduced by the ministry. To conclude, driving
test
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 is
essential
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 factor for the
drivers
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; enhancing the
driver
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 skills and reducing the accident rate is the advantages of
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 situation.
Drivers
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 do not have
a
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time to do
regular
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test
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 and they cannot drive continuously.
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,
this
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 trend has more benefits
outweigh
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that outweigh
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 the drawbacks.
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