Road accidents are more frequent these days and claim many lives each year. As a result, some people suggest that drivers should take regular driving tests throughout their lives, rather than one single driving test, to improve the situation. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of repeat driving tests? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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has more benefits that outweigh the drawbacks.
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can be enhanced the
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and continuously assessment might be
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accident rate decreases tremendously than ever before. Another major benefit is that
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license.
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the
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was introduced by the ministry. To conclude, driving
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factor for the
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