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You have rented an apartment recently, but you are facing some problems. Write a letter to the landlord: • Describe the details of the problems • How are these affecting your family • Ask for possible solutions

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Dear Mr Bond, I am writing to file a complaint about several circumstances that we are facing in our new apartment. Primary, let me introduce myself, I am Ghina Tarhini, and I have rented the flat
last
 month to live with my parents. The main problem started when the storm began by which rainwater is entering from a couple of windows located in the bedrooms.
Moreover
, humidity is appearing on certain external walls of the apartment that generates a bad smell in the home. Unfortunately, my parents are suffering from allergic symptoms due to the odour that will affect their respiratory system for a long period.
Furthermore
, the cold inside the bedrooms is unbearable
as a result
 of the water seepage
that is
 freezing the floor. I would suggest that you contact a specialist in order to fix the windows as soon as possible.
Additionally
, I kindly request you to send a painter to inspect the walls and suggest a viable solution for the problem. Your prompt action is highly required. Sincerely yours, China Tarhini
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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