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some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recucled . They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legalo requirement . To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste ?

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These days ,some individuals believed that the dumps are not recycled sufficiently .They ask the government for making a
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 for waste recycling .It seems to me that the communities should play a crucial role to maintain the environment .
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 with ,there is the main duty which the human will do without any stake ,is to protect the environment .
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 ,the governors should not make a legal for
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 because the people must comply as an important thing in their life .
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 ,some of my neighbours who are not educated in school or university ,make wonderful objects by consuming residue found in their homes.
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 ,it is not related to
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 , society or even education .They do it the same as other housework which is done as a routine .
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, if a person likes environmental protection ,they will recycle their junk automatically without any obligation . It is true to say that making a
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 may force the people to do
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 by any means ,but I still believed that it is not as always and they may release it .To my mind ,the government should produce recycling
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 of making a
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 .To elaborate more ,it can be encouraged individuals to preserve their surroundings with a creative route . To conclude ,as I mentioned , it is not a good way which
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 a
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 for recycling household junk because they should do it automatically .From my ,perspective it might play an important role in their life.
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