Parents often buy their children many toys. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children having a large number of toys?

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two or three decades the way that parents

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and attention to

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their

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changed dramatically.

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part of every person childhood. There are both pros and cons to deciding to do

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discuss some of the reasons why

children

are surrounded

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several

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of amusements and some of the adverse

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can have while they are

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. Let’s look at the advantages of

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. Kids spend

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and considerable proportion of their time

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playing with

toys

either alone or by making connections with their peers. by no means

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parents supply all their offspring needs which

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are part of them. A recent study by

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over the past ten years have found that those people from young group age who have played with different types of

toys

as logo were twice as less likely to face stressful challenges later with others and have greatly developed range of skills.

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through playing

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some girls try to play a role of a doctor and

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her dress,

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she can have better

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of the occupation and do her efforts to have her dream

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true. Turning to the other side of the argument, buying

toys

for

children

could be harmful in many ways,

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, as spending long hours

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playing involves seating still with no movements, it can

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to

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lifestyle that leads to health

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e.g. obesity. If kids participate in more active games like soccer, they would benefit from exercising and promote their physical and mental health.

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, when

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’s demands are satisfied abruptly within seconds it can

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detrimental

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effect on their character as they become

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and assume that life should always get them what they want. All things considered, purchasing all kinds of

toys

for

children

would be simultaneously advantageous and disadvantageous which depends on several including the kind of

toys

and the amount of time spent on them.