People eat more processed food than they did in the past.

People

eat more processed

food

than they did many years ago.

This

is because the number of fast-

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restaurants

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increased over the past few decades dramatically and

this

results in countless health problems.

People

tend to eat more processed

food

compared to the past because they are more likely to visit fast

food

places.

This

is because junk

food

is very well advertised in growing social media content as a tasteful and healthy variant of our diet.

This

means that

people

might not even know the health consequences of frequently consuming junk

food

For example

, recent studies have shown that eating processed

food

as sausages or bacon is cancerogenic and may cause various diseases like diabetes or it can increase blood pressure.

Furthermore

, constantly delivery of trans fats contained in processed

food

can cause mental disorders

such

as depression, PTSD, anxiety or insomnia. Nowadays, we're living in a

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community. We're spending more time on developing our careers and less on figuring out what's the most beneficial way of eating. That's why society

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choosing

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meal which can be reheated just in a few minutes.

This

could mean they are giving up on good diet habits for achieving their career goals.

For example

, my friend Malek ate pre-packed

food

as he hasn't got time for a proper diet and ended up with stomach cancer. In conclusion,

people

eat more processed

food

than in the previous generation due to

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evolving

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fast

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restaurants and the biggest pressure of self-development from our society

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People eat more processed food than they did in the past.

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of home- schooling?

Nowadays companies and other organisations are requiring their employees to wear a uniform. What is your viewpoint on this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing a uniform?

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