People eat more processed food than they did in the past.

People
eat more processed
food
than they did many years ago.
This
is because the number of fast-
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restaurants
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increased over the past few decades dramatically and
this
results in countless health problems.
People
tend to eat more processed
food
compared to the past because they are more likely to visit fast
food
places.
This
is because junk
food
is very well advertised in growing social media content as a tasteful and healthy variant of our diet.
This
means that
people
might not even know the health consequences of frequently consuming junk
food
.
For example
, recent studies have shown that eating processed
food
as sausages or bacon is cancerogenic and may cause various diseases like diabetes or it can increase blood pressure.
Furthermore
, constantly delivery of trans fats contained in processed
food
can cause mental disorders
such
as depression, PTSD, anxiety or insomnia. Nowadays, we're living in a
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community. We're spending more time on developing our careers and less on figuring out what's the most beneficial way of eating. That's why society
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choosing
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meal which can be reheated just in a few minutes.
This
could mean they are giving up on good diet habits for achieving their career goals.
For example
, my friend Malek ate pre-packed
food
as he hasn't got time for a proper diet and ended up with stomach cancer. In conclusion,
people
eat more processed
food
than in the previous generation due to
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evolving
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restaurants and the biggest pressure of self-development from our society
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