Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society others however, belive that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Human

society

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consists of individuals and human beings. In order to be a

community

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a safe,soothing and motivating

invironment

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environment

for itʼs

members

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it needs good organs. Definition and description of

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this good

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this good member

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members

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in different cultures are various but in summary,they are educated, hardworking,law-abiding And

collaborator

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. Who is in charge to create these

specitications

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specifications

in people, is the question and there are

oposite

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opposite

opinions, some

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believe

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belive

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believe

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parents

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while others assume

schools

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, in

this

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assey

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essay

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will discuss both views.

First

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of

all

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parents

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are the reason and source of

children

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ʼs birth so

as a result

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fathers and mothers are the

first

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liables

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liable

of

children

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to

society

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. As it has been said in

introduction

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the introduction

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,

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needs people with decent features and in order to

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these particulars, there is a need for training from

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forthermore

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furthermore

,inherently and

outomatically

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automatically

parents

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are the

first

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and main model of their

children

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as well as the long

houres

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hours

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that they are with

children

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have made a nice

apportunity

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opportunity

for

children

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’s training.

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Finally

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before it comes time for

children

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to go

school

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to school

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, the years that most experts

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believe

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belive

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believe

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human personality is formed,

parents

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are one of the main

origin

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of information and sole teachers of

children

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.

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, opponents of

this

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view point

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viewpoint

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out that the mainspring of developing

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has been educating youth for answering the requests of their lives and the

socity

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society

training of good

members

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, could cause the progress of

whole

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the whole

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community

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.

Additinally

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Additionally

there are instructed teachers in school that with special and modern plans, train

children

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to be good and useful for their location. Another essential point is the principals of

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with checking out the needs of the

community

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in

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at

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different times are changing the definition of a good member

for

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of

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society

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and it means

schools

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are

intelligent

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an intelligent

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place

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places

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for educating

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the student

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student

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students

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to be beneficial for their

community

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. In

summary

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,summary

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according to the results of both

views

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it has

been seemed

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seemed

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schools

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are the more

appropiate

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appropriate

organ to teach

children

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how to be good

members

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for

society

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however

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the role of

parents

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can not be ignored.