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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough in learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some individuals believe that the education system , from undergraduate to postgraduate
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 spent more
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 studying rather than practical skills. I partially agree with the statement .
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 essay will explain why student using study material is more common than practical skills . On the one hand ,
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 spent more
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 in the theoretical part of the
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 rather than the experimental. In India education system
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students
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 have a timetable to follow in that they totally have 8
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 and one lunch break, in that 8
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 they rarely have one practical class and the rest of the
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 will be on
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 . To be more specific the student spends less
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 in their practical
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 is because of the percentage of marks .
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 , in physics , the
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 has both
theory
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 and practice in which the highest passing percentage marks go to
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 than practical to obtain more marks
students
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 spent more
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 in
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 exams.
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 , practising more leads the pupils to stand on their own. Nowadays there are so many unemployment statuses all over the world. Some people not doing the job what they studied for
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 is all because of lack of day to day practical knowledge among them.
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, in the medical carrier, the student has more
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 for practice to study with the patient and most
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 will be the
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 that leads to improving their base knowledge about the
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 which improve their ability to face society independently. To sum up, the education system from all the
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 from undergraduate to postgraduate to give equal importance to practical skills to improve the standard of their knowledge . In real-life more than a
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 , practical experience plays an important role for them to lead a successful life.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rote memorization
  • practical skills
  • adaptable skills
  • critical thinking
  • balanced approach
  • problem-solving
  • decision-making
  • workforce readiness
  • real-life challenges
  • technological advancements
  • information management
  • creativity hindrance
  • lifelong learning
  • skill development
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