You have been working with your company for two years and are interested in a promotion. Write a letter to your direct boss. In your letter: Explain your varied achievements over the past two years Express your interest in growing with the company Ask for a meeting to discuss a potential promotion

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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missive to let you know that I have completed my two years as an assistant Marketing and Sales Manager and my reference number is 44.

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letter is in a request for promotion. I was able to achieve the sales target which was given by Human Resource Manager in the

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year,I was given the best employee title during my

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year when I converted my leads which were crossing Rs 10 lakhs. My main aim behind

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promotion is to develop Managerial skills

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,I find myself capable of handling crucial situations.

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,as a manager one is responsible for each aspect of their department,

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it will be a good step for an individual’s personal growth as it will provide them with more exposure. I would like to request you to spare some time at your convenience.

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could help you decide on which position you may nominate me in your company. I hope to hear from you soon Yours faithfully, Harmar

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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166 words

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You have been working with your company for two years and are interested in a promotion. Write a letter to your direct boss. In your letter: Explain your varied achievements over the past two years Express your interest in growing with the company Ask for a meeting to discuss a potential promotion

some people studying the past is the best way to help young people function well in the modern world. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures could be effective in helping young people to function well in the modern world?

In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day? why do you think some people might no be happy to give up using cash?

In many workplaces, online communication is becoming more commonplace than face-to-face meetings. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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