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Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment in essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

#punishment #death #penalty #lives #crimes #violence #control #society
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 detailing report 110. He was ------- retire until someone offered him the position of head security in
Bangalore
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 warehouse. (A) about to (
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) closely (
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) nearly (D) almost 111. Proper maintenance of your heating equipment ensures that small issues can be fixed ------- they become big ones. (A)
as a result
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(
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)
although
 (D) before 112. The Coraltown Aesthetic Center has
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opened a swimming class for members of the community. (A) recently (
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) closely (
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) directly (D) currently 113. A number of small companies will go bankrupt when the government ------- legal working hours to thirty hours a week. (A) reduces (
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) is reduced (
C
) has reduced (D) will reduce 114. The Solo Adventures is a documentary ------- that chronicles the experiences of three different women
travelers
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. (A) films (
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) filming (
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) filmed (D) film 115. To make customers -------, please follow
this
 instruction. (A) satisfied (
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) satisfy (
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) satisfying (D) satisfaction 116. ------- repeated attempts to penetrate the office equipment market, Bestderk Incorporated has only 5 clients. (A)
As well as
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) Unlike (
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) Despite (D) Within 117. Antic Enterprise Inc. -------
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 right to end the trading partnership if the invoices will not be paid by the end of
this
 month. (A) reserves (
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) reserving (
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) reserved (D) reservation 118. Ms. Bassary found preparing for the Stillman Cereals presentation ------- simple. (A) comparable (
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) compared (
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) comparatively (D) comparing 119. The prize will be awarded to the group ------- business plan receives the highest number of
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votes. (A) whose (
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) which (
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) whom (D) when 120. Mr. Okada should be contacted about payroll procedures because he is the most -------. (A) approved (
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) knowledgeable (
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) complex (D) confirmed
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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