Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment in essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

an
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a

The article an may be incorrect. Consider changing it to agree with the beginning sound of the following word detailing.

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detailing report 110. He was ------- retire until someone offered him the position of head security in Bangalore warehouse. (A) about to (
B
) closely (
C
) nearly (D) almost 111. Proper maintenance of your heating equipment ensures that small issues can be fixed ------- they become big ones. (A)
as a result
(
B
)
in addition
(
C
)
although
(D) before 112. The Coraltown Aesthetic Center has ------- opened a swimming class for members of the community. (A) recently (
B
) closely (
C
) directly (D) currently 113. A number of small companies will go bankrupt when the government ------- legal working hours to thirty hours a week. (A) reduces (
B
) is reduced (
C
) has reduced (D) will reduce 114. The Solo Adventures is a documentary ------- that chronicles the experiences of three different women
travelers
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travellers

The spelling of travelers is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.

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. (A) films (
B
) filming (
C
) filmed (D) film 115. To make customers -------, please follow
this
instruction. (A) satisfied (
B
) satisfy (
C
) satisfying (D) satisfaction 116. ------- repeated attempts to penetrate the office equipment market, Bestderk Incorporated has only 5 clients. (A) As well as (
B
) Unlike (
C
) Despite (D) Within 117. Antic Enterprise Inc. ------- the right to end the trading partnership if the invoices will not be paid by the end of
this
month. (A) reserves (
B
) reserving (
C
) reserved (D) reservation 118.
Ms.
Change the punctuation
Ms

The abbreviated title Ms. seems to be punctuated incorrectly. Consider changing the punctuation.

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Bassary found preparing for the Stillman Cereals presentation ------- simple. (A) comparable (
B
) compared (
C
) comparatively (D) comparing 119. The prize will be awarded to the group ------- business plan
receives
Correct pronoun usage
that receives

It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.

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the highest number of
the
Correct article usage
apply

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votes. (A) whose (
B
) which (
C
) whom (D) when 120.
Mr.
Change the punctuation
Mr

The abbreviated title Mr. seems to be punctuated incorrectly. Consider changing the punctuation.

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Okada should be contacted about payroll procedures because he is the most -------. (A) approved (
B
) knowledgeable (
C
) complex (D) confirmed
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