Some people say that the main environmental problems of our time is loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many are of the opinion that the risk of endangered

plants

and wildlife are the most severe consequences of our worsening environment while others argue that other environmental issues are more important compared to the

first

one .I would say that both arguments have validity, but I would lean toward the latter. On the one hand, there is a strong connection between different types of

plants

and

animals

. In fact, some

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and

animals

are in

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same food chain, some of them are

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sources of food for others.

As a result

, If special species were endangered, others

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depend on them will disappear too and

this

vicious circle will continue .

For example

, there is a special squirrel in North America

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feed on the oak seed. Because of deforestation in that

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the number of squirrels has been dramatically decreased and nowadays they are announced as an endangered species.

On the other hand

, some people including myself think that global warming is the most important environmental issue

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because it leads to various environmental problems which affect

plants

,

animals

and humans. Global warming results in a lack of rain and snow. So, a lot of

animals

and

plants

are died because of drought and famine. An Incremental rise in the earth’s temperature, increase the frequency of some natural disasters

such

as hurricanes and tsunami and resulted in thousands of death , injuries and billions of dollars in damages , the effect of which set back countries economically for years.