You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his performance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to let you know how much I enjoyed your recent concert in Mumbai. I have been a huge fan of yours and seeing you perform live was

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a blessing. The songs you picked were amongst my favourites and you sang them so well. Your powerful voice gave me goosebumps and I could sense the audience loved them too. Being an aspiring musician, I have been training in various genres of music for more than 5 years and am an active member in a 6-member band. We keep performing our own creations in small gatherings and post them online. I would appreciate it if you could have a look at our music at the link below and provide your valuable feedback. It will encourage us even more and help us to reach a larger audience if you could

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post a few words about our band on our social media account. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Seema Kapoor

roshniandySat Jan 15 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

167 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

stellar performance
captivating
musical prowess
talent
repertoire
collaboration
mentorship
resonate
aspiring musician
composition
rendition
inspirational
vocal range
harmonize
skillset

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