Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, many schools give a lot of
homework
to children
. Some people think that homework
is not necessary to be given to the children
, while others argue that it is urgent because by doing homework
, students
could learn more. This
essay will discuss both views in detail and give my personal view about it
.
In my opinion, I support the Correct pronoun usage
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school
for giving homework
because the children
learn responsibility
and hone their knowledge. At first
, the children
may feel fear of their teacher unless they finish their homework
. They fear being punished by the teacher and ostracized by their friends, but there is research about growing responsibility
in children
by giving homework
. Based on the research in America, the full grown
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full-grown
children
/adolescent children
(13-19 years old) become responsible to their schools due to being consistent in doing the homework
. They are also
responsible to manage their time
if they want to play after completing their work. Besides
, by giving homework
children
might sharpen their knowledge because usually
teachers tend to make different types of questions in Add a comma
,usually
homework
compared to schoolwork. Therefore
, giving homework
has an urgent role to shape children
’s responsibility
.
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responsibilities
On the other hand
, people might argue that homework
should not be given to the children
because the children
might become stressed and some students
are not expert
in Fix the agreement mistake
experts
homework
subjects. The children
might become stressed because they must spare their play
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playtime
time
to finish the homework
. When there is lots of homework
given by school
, some Add an article
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a school
children
might be unable to manage their time
and become stressed. For
instance
the Add a comma
,instance
children
have Math homework
and Science homework
, then
tomorrow they have English homework
, but they have not finished the previous homework
. The inability to manage time
to do homework
will make children
feel pressured and the children
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are stress
stress
caused by the high tension. Wrong verb form
stressed
In addition
, students
might not be expert
in some subjects at Fix the agreement mistake
experts
school
but they are given that homework
. For instance
, a child loves sports such
as basketball and swimming, but he/ she is unable to understand Math. Thus
, parents think homework
has an unimportant role because some students
do not have expertise in all school
subjects and they become stressed due to trouble in doing the homework
.
To conclude, there are pros and cons about
giving Change preposition
to
homework
to children
. People argue that giving homework
might bring more negative impact
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impacts
such
as being stressed and not skillful
in that subject than positive impact. In my view, by having Change the spelling
skilful
homework
children
will learn more about responsibility
and hone their knowledge. In the future, school
hopefully may be customized in giving Fix the agreement mistake
schools
homework
based on what students
expert
in.Add a missing verb
are expert
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