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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays, digitalization and automation have changed
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public's behaviour, including the way of reading about something. Sometimes, the increasing of technology makes someone could get the knowledge much easier without paying.
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, there are some
people
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 who have an argument that reading newspapers or
books
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 for free is illegal. But, in my opinion, I strongly agree with the
first
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 statement, that everybody could get
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 from
books
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 or newspapers for free in the digitalization era. There are several reasons why the
information
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 could be obtained for free in the midst of increasing technology.
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, many
people
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 want to share their creations (e.g
books
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, news, arts, etc)
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 the public in quick time by using the internet. The impact of
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, we as a consumer can get their creation for free
instead
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 of buying
information
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 from the bookstore, newspaper shop, etc. Basically, in my opinion,
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 is a win-win solution that the producer of
information
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 could blast their creation quickly and the consumer could get the producer's
information
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 by free using the internet.
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, the hardcopy of
information
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 (
books
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, newspaper, journals, etc) is more expensive than the softcopy (online) of
information
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. From the producer's perspective, if they want to produce their creation by hardcopy,
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 they have to pay some of the costs like the more public fee, production cost, etc.
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, from the consumer's perspective,
people
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also
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 prefer to get the
information
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 for free
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 of buying it at a high price. In conclusion, the technology and internet will be used in a wide range of aspects by all
people
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 because it can give benefit all of them.
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 could change the way how
people
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 could get
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 or read something from an online source.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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